What I learnt this week

This week I have learnt that gasses in the atmosphere that surround planet Earth absorb and release inferred radiation, and that our planet is warming up and that the warming could have a huge impact on the Antarctic marine life food circle.            

response writing

This article was about Maori and Pasifika students failing national standards and most of them being Maori and Pasifika students. This  article was written by Kate Shuttle-worth .

I think that the writing was good because it uses good quotes from people.  Also the Education Minister Hekia Parata said that 1 in 5 students are failing. Maori and Pasifika students are making up much of the under achievement but I don't think that it is fair to just blame Maori and Pasifika  because it could be other ethnicities.

Liz Gordon an independent researcher found 74 percent are male that are failing but I don't think that it is just boys because some girls like to chat with each other during class and don't know what to do.

I think that this article will get students and others to try and learn so that the Minister and other people say that it isn't Pasifika and Maori students that are failing  school and national standards also the government might think that the teachers are to blame because they pay they teachers to teach the students but if the kids aren't learning the teachers pay might be cut off they could be fired because the pupil isn't listening or behaving .     

My dad has a black thorny  beard  and is tall he likes to wear  clothes that matches. He has tattoos on both arms on his right arm he has the Wilson clan insignia. On the left arm he has our names  he  has dark chocolate brown eyes and dark black  hair and he is  33 years old.

My dad is funny and likes to be cheeky he  also likes to joke around  with us and his friends . My dad says that I look like him when he was my age but he had  black hair and brown eyes when he says that he points at the photo on the fridge. The picture is of him and his cousin when his cousin was a baby.

He is helpful because whenever I need  help with anything  he helps me with stuff like  my homework. Sometimes  he is  fun because he plays with me and my brother and sister and sometimes he will play video-games with me. Sometimes he doesn't like it because he is already doing something or because I'm too good and he gets angry because I  keep winning  but he get angry in a funny way .

He's  tall so its hard to lose him in a crowd of people. He's also strong and funny he’s got  good  taste in things like clothes and shoes and other stuff to spend  money on. My dad likes to spend time with us when he has nothing to do   .

                                        

           

In my dream holiday I would like go on a cruise ship that has water world on it after I had gone on every ride 10 or 20 times i would like to go on

then i would like to go on a spaceship to another planet and get some space guns to keep as a souvenir and proof that went another planet  with my family.

this is what I read today from NZ herald

This morning a baby has been injured violent incident. The police and ambulance staff were called at 5.30 am to the house on princess street. Sergeant Bruce terry said. Police inquiries are ongoing  it's very early on in the situation and were  just getting organised with the investigation and the ongoing work he said.